Trite or no? help me improve will you?

Who made up all the rules? We've followed them like fools! Bah ha I love that song..I was inspired by it myself..Trite...well to tell the truth I'm not sure what that means but ..This isn't that original but what is really? Everyone conforms Especially those of us who try hard not to...I love the title Cookie Cutter Paradise makes me smile and think of cookies..Come on man you know you want to be a perfectly round cookie! Yes you do ! Don't lie! You can't fight it! Trying to fight it only makes you like everyone else who tries to fight..the all black wearing angst having brainwashed mes Nothing is new under the sun and what not..As far as helping you to improve it..There is no help from me sorry :( Oh and before i forget.. Remember little duck..Just say NO *she says as she uses her Red Ribbon to snort coke*